English - flashbacks

In English today we looked at a short video clip, 'The Piano'. Our focus was to include flashbacks in our writing- we wrote some group flashbacks, here is as example:

Everyday, I sit there and play my favourite piece of music. Specifically, I play the music that reminds me of the war; back in the days when I was a medic in the Navy. As I listen to my much-loved pieces, I remember memories of my past; memories that have lasted a lifetime. The music brings back the memories of the times I risked my life to comfort the wounded. Specifically, the time when I lost my brother. I ran to save him but I was too late.

By Neive, Dylan, Harry and Krysta